My father and my mother worked. ถ้าหนูใช้ worked ตัวนี้ แสดงว่าเป็นอดีต ตอนนี้ไม่ได้ทำงานแล้ว ถ้ายังทำงานอยู่ หนูต้องเปลี่ยนเป็น works ค่ะ
I am a person first คงหมายถึงเป็นลูกคนแรกใช่ไหมคะ ให้แก้เป็น I am the elder.
I age fifteen years old. แก้เป็น I am fifteen years old.
My name is Umaporm Tiamkumhaeng. My family is small. I live with my parents. My father is thirty-eight and my mother is thirty-four. I’m sixteen. I’m single.
Chanita,
My family is a large family with five of my parents,แก้เป็น My family is a large family with five members, my parents,grandmother , my brother and me.
ทำไมบอกมีสมาชิก 5 คน แล้ว sister โผล่มาจากไหน
My name is Ms. Siriwan Changkid My family has a big family, seven members are all persons aged 45 years, fathers have professional general contractors. 40 year old mother at home mother raising grandson 20 year old brother with sister professional general contractors shy sister, nephew and I are 15 years of age There are currently studying in the fourth grade at Bua Kaew Gaysorn. My family are very happy together.
Siriwan,
แก้ไข
เธอแต่งเรื่องมาคล้ายๆ กับของธันยา ไปดูตรงที่เหมือนกันให้แก้ไขตามนั้น
1.My family has a big family แก้เป็น My family is big with 7 members.
2. บอกอายุแม่ให้ถูกต้อง ดูที่ครูเขียนบอกธันยา เสร็จแล้วตรงนี้mother at home mother raising grandson แก้เป็น My mother is at home raising a grandson.
3.There are currently studying in the fourth grade at Bua Kaew Gaysorn. แก้เป็น We are currently studying in Matayom 4 at………เขียนชื่อโรงเรียนให้ถูก
4. ประโยคสุดท้ายเขียนถูกแล้ว
My name is Ms. Tanya Piromphum with my family members all 8 people Are both 45 years old father has hired professional. Mothers aged 44 years professional general contractors. A brother, aged 22 years of professional driving motorcycle A sister aged 23 years of professional general contractors. A new 19 year old cousin.
Tanya,
ดีมากที่ไม่ลอกใครมา
แก้ไข
1. ข้างหลังนามสกุลใส่จุด Full Stop นับเป็น 1 ประโยค
2. with my family members all 8 people Are both 45 years old father has hired professional.
แก้เป็น There are 8 members in my family.
Are both 45 years old ครูไม่เข้าใจ ถ้าจะบอกว่าพ่ออายุ 45 My father is 45 years old.
3. father has hired professional.นี่ก็คงจะเขียนว่าพ่อทำงานรับจ้างใช่ไหม แก้เป็น My father works for hire.
4. แก้ไขตรงคุณแม่ด้วย บอกอายุให้ถูกต้อง professional general contractors. ถ้าจะบอกว่าใครทำงานอะไร หนูอย่าเอาคำว่า professional มาวางข้างหน้า ให้บอกอาชีพเลย professional มันแปลว่าเก่งมาก ไม่ได้แปลว่างาน และครูไม่เข้าใจ general contractors.แปลว่า นายหน้าหรือเปล่า ถ้าใช่หนูต้องใช้คำว่า agent
5. A brother, aged 22 years of professional driving motorcycle แก้เป็น My brother is 22 years old and he is a motorcycle taxi.
แค่นี้ก้ได้ 5 ประโยคแล้ว ไม่ต้องบอกเรื่อง cousin
Dear teacher Namthip
My Pathumwadee singto My family is a small family.
And have all five family members in person
Ie.My Father Ghospital singto and My mother sunan
singto
And it was his sister Cho. Kusuma singto
A grandmother and a person name Rinda. singto
Our families are together happily despite the small family matter.
Pathumwadee,
แก้ไข
1. หลัง Dear teacher Namthip มีเครื่องหมาย ,
2. My Pathumwadee singto — My name is Pathumwadee Singto. นามสกุลต้องขึ้นต้นด้วยตัวใหญ่
3. And have all five family members in person แก้เป็น There are all five family members.
Ie.My Father Ghospital singto and My mother sunan singto แก้เป็น i.e. my father Ghospital singto,ทy mother sunan singto (ชื่อและนามสกุลขึ้นต้นด้วยตัวใหญ่) my sister…..,my grandmother………and me.
4. Our families are together happily despite the small family matter. แก้เป็น Our family are happy though sometimes we have some kinds of problems about family matter.
Dear teacher Namthip.
My name is Pathumwadee Singto . There are all five family members.
i.e. my father Ghospital Singto,mother Sunan Singto
my sister Kusuma Singto,my grandmother Rinda. Singto and me.
Our family are happy though sometimes we have some kinds of problems about family matter.
Dear teacher Namthip.
My name is Patima Prajuabsuk. I am 16 year old.
My family have all 5 people.My father Bandit Prajuabsuk. My mother Mali Prajuabsuk. Our families live together happily always.
Dearteacher Namthip.
My name isPennpha Orn-Orna . I am 15 year old.
I have family members with four people.
my father Sarmrun Orn-Orna ,I am 42 year old.
My mother Umphan Orn-Orna ,I am 33 year old.
And a brother also a person.name Satporn Orn-Orna .
Our family live together happily, although a small family.
Dearteacher Namthip.
My name is Paween chaiywud.
My family has only three people together.
Includes patriarch.my father Sa-nguan chaiywud.
My mother Olaiak chaiywud.
Although my family does not have a big family.
But my family is in love with each other.
Dearteacher Namthip.
My name is Nanruemon Noree.My family is a large family because there are six people each.
The great patriarch.my father KittisaK Noree.
My mother Bongkod Kert-ngern.And a sister and brother three people.A sister.Kornrat Noree.
And a brother.Chinnawat. Noree.
A brother and another person.Rungtawan Noree.
Dearteacher Namthip.
My name isNanuremon Noree.
my father Kittisak Noree.
My mother Bongkod Kert-ngern.And a sister.Kornrat
Noree.It also has a younger brother.Rungtawan Noree.
Dear teacher Namthip.
My name is parichart SiCha-oom.Nicknam is tukta.
I am 16 year old.my father Suksawat SiCha-oom.
My mother tabtem Wari pond. My Sister Rawiwan SiCha-oom.My Brother ahnusom SiCha-oom. My family have all 5 people. Family Are together happily.
Dear teacher Namthip.
My family has 4 people l’m name Mr.Atitayaboot morjor, my brother who is a third of my father Mr. Sukij morjor my mother Mrs Urai a live cover of my small house hold. The other is eating enough is enough. But now I am with Pi’s father at home. My father and mother in the home country. Amnat Charoen.
Dear teacher Namthip.
My family has two brothers who I was at first. My eldest is studying in grade 4. And one sister studying in grade 2, his parents, I do not wash well with my mother but his father sent for free tuition for my sister. Include tuition wig
Teachernamthip2010 
Dear Teacher.
My name is Anussara Janjang. My family is small. My father and my mother worked. I have two brothers I am a person first. I age fifteen years old.
My father and my mother worked. ถ้าหนูใช้ worked ตัวนี้ แสดงว่าเป็นอดีต ตอนนี้ไม่ได้ทำงานแล้ว ถ้ายังทำงานอยู่ หนูต้องเปลี่ยนเป็น works ค่ะ
I am a person first คงหมายถึงเป็นลูกคนแรกใช่ไหมคะ ให้แก้เป็น I am the elder.
I age fifteen years old. แก้เป็น I am fifteen years old.
Dear Teacher.
My name is Umaporm Tiamkumhaeng. My family is small. I live with my parents. My father is thirty-eight and my mother is thirty-four. I’m sixteen. I’m single.
อุมาพร You work is all correct. You’ve got 5 marks. Good student!
ขอแก้ไข
Dear Teacher.
My name is Anussara Janjang. My family is small. My father and my mother works. I am the elder. I am fifteen years old.
OK. You’ve got 5 marks.
My family is a large family with five of my parents, grandmother and brother. I have one sister, one brother, my family live together happily.
Chanita,
My family is a large family with five of my parents,แก้เป็น My family is a large family with five members, my parents,grandmother , my brother and me.
ทำไมบอกมีสมาชิก 5 คน แล้ว sister โผล่มาจากไหน
My name is Ms. Siriwan Changkid My family has a big family, seven members are all persons aged 45 years, fathers have professional general contractors. 40 year old mother at home mother raising grandson 20 year old brother with sister professional general contractors shy sister, nephew and I are 15 years of age There are currently studying in the fourth grade at Bua Kaew Gaysorn. My family are very happy together.
Siriwan,
แก้ไข
เธอแต่งเรื่องมาคล้ายๆ กับของธันยา ไปดูตรงที่เหมือนกันให้แก้ไขตามนั้น
1.My family has a big family แก้เป็น My family is big with 7 members.
2. บอกอายุแม่ให้ถูกต้อง ดูที่ครูเขียนบอกธันยา เสร็จแล้วตรงนี้mother at home mother raising grandson แก้เป็น My mother is at home raising a grandson.
3.There are currently studying in the fourth grade at Bua Kaew Gaysorn. แก้เป็น We are currently studying in Matayom 4 at………เขียนชื่อโรงเรียนให้ถูก
4. ประโยคสุดท้ายเขียนถูกแล้ว
My name is Ms. Tanya Piromphum with my family members all 8 people Are both 45 years old father has hired professional. Mothers aged 44 years professional general contractors. A brother, aged 22 years of professional driving motorcycle A sister aged 23 years of professional general contractors. A new 19 year old cousin.
Tanya,
ดีมากที่ไม่ลอกใครมา
แก้ไข
1. ข้างหลังนามสกุลใส่จุด Full Stop นับเป็น 1 ประโยค
2. with my family members all 8 people Are both 45 years old father has hired professional.
แก้เป็น There are 8 members in my family.
Are both 45 years old ครูไม่เข้าใจ ถ้าจะบอกว่าพ่ออายุ 45 My father is 45 years old.
3. father has hired professional.นี่ก็คงจะเขียนว่าพ่อทำงานรับจ้างใช่ไหม แก้เป็น My father works for hire.
4. แก้ไขตรงคุณแม่ด้วย บอกอายุให้ถูกต้อง professional general contractors. ถ้าจะบอกว่าใครทำงานอะไร หนูอย่าเอาคำว่า professional มาวางข้างหน้า ให้บอกอาชีพเลย professional มันแปลว่าเก่งมาก ไม่ได้แปลว่างาน และครูไม่เข้าใจ general contractors.แปลว่า นายหน้าหรือเปล่า ถ้าใช่หนูต้องใช้คำว่า agent
5. A brother, aged 22 years of professional driving motorcycle แก้เป็น My brother is 22 years old and he is a motorcycle taxi.
แค่นี้ก้ได้ 5 ประโยคแล้ว ไม่ต้องบอกเรื่อง cousin
My name is Mongkolrat Marayat I’m fifteen years old. I live with my father and mother in Pathumtani and I’m an only girl.
Mongkolrat ,
แก้ไข
1. พอจบถึงนามสกุลต้องใส่จุด Full Stop ถือเป็น 1 ประโยค
2. หนูยังแต่งประโยคขาดไป 2 ประโยคนะคะ ประโยคจะนับด้วยจุด Full Stop.
Dear teacher Namthip
My Pathumwadee singto My family is a small family.
And have all five family members in person
Ie.My Father Ghospital singto and My mother sunan
singto
And it was his sister Cho. Kusuma singto
A grandmother and a person name Rinda. singto
Our families are together happily despite the small family matter.
Pathumwadee,
แก้ไข
1. หลัง Dear teacher Namthip มีเครื่องหมาย ,
2. My Pathumwadee singto — My name is Pathumwadee Singto. นามสกุลต้องขึ้นต้นด้วยตัวใหญ่
3. And have all five family members in person แก้เป็น There are all five family members.
Ie.My Father Ghospital singto and My mother sunan singto แก้เป็น i.e. my father Ghospital singto,ทy mother sunan singto (ชื่อและนามสกุลขึ้นต้นด้วยตัวใหญ่) my sister…..,my grandmother………and me.
4. Our families are together happily despite the small family matter. แก้เป็น Our family are happy though sometimes we have some kinds of problems about family matter.
Dear teacher Namthip.
My name is Pathumwadee Singto . There are all five family members.
i.e. my father Ghospital Singto,mother Sunan Singto
my sister Kusuma Singto,my grandmother Rinda. Singto and me.
Our family are happy though sometimes we have some kinds of problems about family matter.
Dear teacher Namthip.
My name is Patima Prajuabsuk. I am 16 year old.
My family have all 5 people.My father Bandit Prajuabsuk. My mother Mali Prajuabsuk. Our families live together happily always.
Dearteacher Namthip.
My name isPennpha Orn-Orna . I am 15 year old.
I have family members with four people.
my father Sarmrun Orn-Orna ,I am 42 year old.
My mother Umphan Orn-Orna ,I am 33 year old.
And a brother also a person.name Satporn Orn-Orna .
Our family live together happily, although a small family.
Dearteacher Namthip.
My name is Paween chaiywud.
My family has only three people together.
Includes patriarch.my father Sa-nguan chaiywud.
My mother Olaiak chaiywud.
Although my family does not have a big family.
But my family is in love with each other.
Dearteacher Namthip.
My name is Nanruemon Noree.My family is a large family because there are six people each.
The great patriarch.my father KittisaK Noree.
My mother Bongkod Kert-ngern.And a sister and brother three people.A sister.Kornrat Noree.
And a brother.Chinnawat. Noree.
A brother and another person.Rungtawan Noree.
Dearteacher Namthip.
My name isNanuremon Noree.
my father Kittisak Noree.
My mother Bongkod Kert-ngern.And a sister.Kornrat
Noree.It also has a younger brother.Rungtawan Noree.
Dearteacher Namthip.
My name is Wimontra Thusamud.Our family is together with love and warmth.
my father Wanchai Thusamud,My mother Buntra Thusamud
Dearteacher Namthip.
My name is Paween Chaiyawud.my father Sa-nguan
Chaiyawud.My mother Olailak Chaiyawud.
We are a small family size, but together with understanding.
Dear teacher Namthip.
My name is parichart SiCha-oom.Nicknam is tukta.
I am 16 year old.my father Suksawat SiCha-oom.
My mother tabtem Wari pond. My Sister Rawiwan SiCha-oom.My Brother ahnusom SiCha-oom. My family have all 5 people. Family Are together happily.
Dear teacher Namthip.
My family has 4 people l’m name Mr.Atitayaboot morjor, my brother who is a third of my father Mr. Sukij morjor my mother Mrs Urai a live cover of my small house hold. The other is eating enough is enough. But now I am with Pi’s father at home. My father and mother in the home country. Amnat Charoen.
Dear teacher Namthip.
My family has two brothers who I was at first. My eldest is studying in grade 4. And one sister studying in grade 2, his parents, I do not wash well with my mother but his father sent for free tuition for my sister. Include tuition wig
Dearteacher Namthip.
My name is Ponpan Katang.
My Brother is one .
My family has only four people together.